Thursday, July 7, 2011

English is fun: Help me improve.

What factors are related to academic success in high school students?

High school is an important academic phase in a students’ life.  Good grades and success in high school are essential in order to guarantee a better life ahead. Students should really focus and perform at this stage, but in contrast many of them doing the opposite. In my opinion, there are three major factors of their success in high school. 

Firstly, families that spread their loves, attentions and supports to their children will indirectly instil motivations in them. These motivations will turn into inspirations and determinations for them to work harder. Appropriate study facilities provided by parents are also a good investment for their academic excellence.

The other factor is peer group. High school students are teenagers who at this age treasure and enjoy their relationship with peers. People they mix with have high influence in them especially their attitudes towards other people, society, academic and country. Surrounded by positive friends will influenced a student to be more responsible to their study, whereas being in a wrong group could result in negative habits that might affect their exam grades.

Finally, school itself have an important role towards their students’ achievement. Students enjoy going to school which have good facilities, great support from teachers, excellent relationship with staff and interesting subjects. All these contribute in enhancing motivation in a student.  

In conclusion, a lot of factors lead to high school students’ success. We are fortunate to have a lot of students excel during their school and therefore able to contribute to the society.

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macam budak-budak punya essay tak? T_T. masa dah suntuk ni. common guys. need your comment. TQ


  1. baguih gak nih, terus practice guna topic yg serius. che nak tiru ugak lah, tapi still jauh berbanding hang yg layak band 7 ke atas nih.

  2. toksah mengarut aizudin oii...hg punya writing lebih mature bahasa n ayatnya...che pny level muet lg ni

  3. Sebenarnya che perasan kalau hang boleh kekalkan level menulis ini easily boleh dpt 6.5. Cuma yg bahaya adalah menulis tak sama dgn menaip, tak ada spelling check dll. Itu yg che risau skang, byk sgt salah eja.

  4. Yang paling penting kena elak mistake dlm ejaan, sbb menlus tak ada spell checking. Vocab hang agak bagus, variation of words were used. Isi pun bagus gak. Overall che sara hang dah okay, atr least nak dpt 6.5 tu boleh.

  5. ejaan memang problem..kalau tak konfiden ejaan, tpksa la cancel nk guna pkataan yg extravagant